11. A Reflection of Beyond the Edge of the World Moin. I hope you had fun reading this short story. However, I’m interested in improving, so I’ve collected some criticism both from me and from others. Alice says: 1. The protagonist is rather forgettable I think I agree with this.…
10. The End — Beyond the Edge of the World Lily was excellent at flying. Better than me, at least. She said it was because I taught her well, but also because she had a bit of time to go through the theory before actually starting. We flew almost sideways…
9. The lowest Point — Beyond the Edge of the World The way back down was more troublesome than the way here. If I had been a bit disappointed in my horse being slow, it still was faster than limping old me. I spotted the horse on the plain below. It…
8. Scarland — Beyond the Edge of the World I rode until the night and then some more. The goal was clear: Scarland, before the guards at the border had gotten the news of who I was. Villages flew past, and the full moon dimly lit the way. I…
